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Old 06-27-04, 09:51 PM   #133
Decree Wun
That's Gangsta
 
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From: 9 Oh 5
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YO INFluential i checked your battle...with rap master...this is what you need to work on...........................


make 1 Line ONE LINE..like i saw 1 line like

the kid is here.............blah blah blah .................................................. ................................like that

but it should be like

The kid is here and im bout to end ya career (1 Line) you put like 1 lien for like pages




like here this is an example of how ur battle shuld loook

the sickness dont stop im the prince of R.B....
im Grindin Cuzzin, Ya'll Can Neva Stop Me....
No punches included im jus freestylin,
Niggaz tryin to be friend...shorties buck wylin...
im so sick...i can never get merked....
the type of shit i spit will leave you hurt...

that was wack but see each line was ONE LINE..u was doin

i will kill u easily andt his line will go on for ever becuase im soo sick lmfao u can not stop the best i rock a vet (1)
becuz im soo sick i will leave blood drippin from ur chest...fck the rest im from the west u cant stop me now so give it a resty (2)

dont be doin that LMFAO
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