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Old 06-28-04, 12:22 AM   #6
M&rk
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yo lil Q get some vocab for real. look at all dem words u rhymed, and ya opener first line was makin fun of yaself, dont do that shit, ya second line was on track good personal kinda. but every line was a punch, very very weak but they was punches no self glorification good job there fo realz.

judge-
I still knew, that the wack verse that you made was still you

You’re Lost In Life and now you want to Quit *
But now is that he acknowledge it, that he cannot spit

Notice this, give up cuz ya life and ya rhymes is ridiculous
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them are the only lines u had punches in. very weak.
!~~~ every other line was filler self glorification, that aint rapbattlin keep that shit for the open mics.

Now I decided to pound on ya bitch like “Motokombat Goro”
~~~self glorification filler, when u say im ganna do sumin to u, thats what that is. not what u do in battles.
Then I be leavin “scarz” on ya bitch like if I was Zorro
~~~self glorification, no punch, and why's scarz in quotes his name or sig has nothin to do wit that, u attempin wordplay when theres none there.
My rhymes can blind you like when you look at an eclipse
~~~self glorification, instead of sayin what your rhymes will do say what his rhymes wont do, thats what a punch is, and thats what battling is.

too much self glorification not enough punches from u judge

vote-lil Q

every line of his was a punch, very weak but more of them and less self glorification, gotta give it to him sorry son. no hate, jus tellin ya what shits about.
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