marvolousj1009:

who u pricks is pressin??...fukk it tho ima teach u kidds a lesson-
i'll give black 5 shots and since he ya boy ima give da "magician 7"-
^^lmao hott bar sick opener good punches and personals and multies 9/10
u battle 2 many newb's marv is different,but haze u gota problem spittin-i know u y u dont do audio's cuzz you "suck on da mic" like "robbin givens"-
^^hot meta wasnt feelin the punches multies nice tho 7/10
fagget i keep about 2 clipps,and nigga just know i'll even shoot chicks-
so nigga u betta tell ya "babe" im like dat "yankee's" now im "ruth-less"-
^^hott meta again nice punch 7/10
u garbage dont believe dem dicks dat pm u and say dogg ya text hott-
its no "game" i'll kill ya "old girl" & put her in a coffin datz whut i call a "x-box"-(wow)
^^meta's is sick raw punches creativity 8/10
black haze u starvin and broke nigga u aint gota coin da toss-
you suck u gon have da "throw ya finger's" at me da get ya "point across"-
^^hott meta again!! good punch 8/10
i could give u "2 shots" from a "tech" but i aint a ref "countin pivids"-
u with a gun i doubt u'll spit it,but me haze i'll put da "bird 2 ya head" like a "falcon fitted"-
^^fire thats all i gotta say 10/10
black haze dis guy is weak,talk tuff but aint neva ryde with heat-
nigga u gay and scared da "come out da closet" like u "playin hide n seek"-
^^i said a line just like this no credit for played lines 2/10

overall : 51/70

black haze:

im mean yo, hit dis dude wit a bean yo, rap games el nino...
marv's shyt couldnt b hot if his asshole ate a jalapeno...
^^good multies decent punch 7/10
im best to succeed, u best to get smoked like weed...
doggy i spit shells n i aint talkin bout no sunflowa seedz...
dis dude aint scared to get on his knees, all u gotta say is please...
he cant handle the heat like Mr. Freeze...(batman)
^^weak bars 8/20
put da heata to head ya thought will scatter b...
beat u wit a duracell n get 'charged fo assault n battery'...
^^hott shyt your best bar 9/10
im'a murder dis emcee n wen i do nobody gonn find u...
i'll punch a hole in ya chest n give a pound to da man behind u...
u'll b askin 4 a dance n tony hawk wont even 'grind u'...
i leave u brainless n ignored ya own brain wont even 'mind u'...
^^some decent punches not too hott tho 13/20
ya mom fat ass hell she big enuff to camp on..
u get no pussy so u in n out of her like tampons...
u souped cuz in da club ya b gettin ya dance on...
rumor has it da only dick on ya hip is a strap on...
^^lol at last line good punches 15/20
FiNiShA

from all da clues i gave u dis dude gay im guessin...
its da time of da month dats y dis is nigga stressin...(period)
on da mic ma skills is marvolous like ya sn...
i just taught dis dude his 1009'th lesson...
^^weak finishers period lines are played 7/20

overall : 59/110

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hott verse from you marv you killed this in every area some lines are stretched but thats the only thing i saw wrong with your verse...black you need stronger punches multies..meta's wordplay and more vocab

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