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Old 06-28-04, 01:07 AM   #7
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If thats what you thought
 
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From: I.Q. of a Genius
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opener: meta
structure: tie
flwo: meta
punches: meta
personal: meta
closer: meta

kcf: I seen you do better. punches were not hitting that hard. and mispelled words mad it hard for me to understand some things...so i had to read it twice to get it.
potential..I see. work on wordplay

meta: decent verse, nice opener maybe the best line...dope. it was funny too. you had a better flow. punches just stuck....closer was okay...but it was better then cam's closer.

v/meta

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