this took my about 25 minutes for the whole thing lil keystyle...

Intro:
yo homie check out that fly honey over there....
there's sumthin' bout her I gotta get here
somehow & I know I will.....

Verse:

saw your beautiful face one day and that instantly made me stare
she looked back like "that cat wants me for the sex, for me he don't care"
but she was mistaken I respect my mama too much to do any woman wrong
I don't give a shit about your body if I understand you, fuck yo thong
but I couldn't help but look up and down checkin' out your exterior
I be having erotic dreams thinkin' about how i'll get to the interior
then I got to know ya loved you for your personality not your looks
I would die for a woman like you quit crimes and stop being a crook
changed the way I looked at the opposite sex cuz I fell deeply in love
you made me feel like I became a better man, made me fly higher than a dove
but too bad it had to end with no last kiss, no goodbye why did u leave?
I was completely loyal & honest to you I ain't even try to decieve
but now you gone went away and I know you ain't never coming back
you left this cat & fucked my brainz up made me feel useless like crack
why did you have to die so suddenly without finding someone better then me?
no one deserved you more than one of your many homies girl you see?

Outro:

but in my heart I know I will alwayz love you & only you
fuck all them others FUCK THA HATERS and all the catz badmouthing you...
you only left me in the physical form but you alwayz be in my heart
R.I.P. gurl I really miss ya & I'll never forget ya...

and the rating out of ten is???? __/10

and don't forget to give me pointers if needed