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Old 06-28-04, 01:41 AM   #14
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ok meta your verse was ok but you had a couple played lines and it was really really basic....your finisher was a really bad played line too...killa your opener was hott and str8 to the point good personal

opener: killa
structure: killa
wordplay : meta
mulites: none
vocab: killa
personals : killa
punches: metah
closer: tie

vote: killacamflow

this was a close battle but your closer made you lose meta and the fact that you used no personals hurt ya verse and your flow was inconsistent and structure was choppy

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