young chris-your verse was ok i did like this line
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Y0U A FAGG0T, DATS DEALIN WIT A HUSTLA, Y0UR A 24 YEAR 0LD WH0 GETS EXICITED WEN HE BATTLES A Y0UNGSTA!
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and this was ok
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DUDES A CL0WN Y0U CAN TELL BY HIS RAP STYLE, NIGGA DIS REAL LIFE THIS AINT N0 BATTLE 0FF 8 MILE!!
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fluid-it think your verse had abit more flow
and you had some good punches in there
this would have made a good closer
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too " yung " for my rhymes, and the X in ur face aint even rated
i'll leave u jaded, cuz u still need moms permission to play bitch
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vote-FluidMoon... for overall structure that's all
good by both keep it up...