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Old 06-28-04, 04:24 AM   #14
MC AK
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aiight both of u had decent verses, sparsin, ya opener was pretty good, but the last line of ya second bar didnt have enough syllibles, also some parts of ya rhyme i didnt understand, but u do got skill dog u aint wak.
eclipse, your opener was a bit weak, but like that other nigga said, u picked up well afta that. the adam line was hot i actually laughed when i read that, also ur finish was pretty good. ima give this one to eclipse.

Vote- Eclipse
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