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Old 06-28-04, 04:29 AM   #14
JPoll
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alright this was a decent battle...
hmm first vendetta...
decent beat...although 50's trash...you flowed pretty well...not as good as you have before...but everything seemed on point...you rhymes weren't as clear as i would have liked but they were still good...and your punches were all correct and welll doen...nice drop...

spectre...
decent...hmm i really like the beat...but really after that everthing fell off...i really didn't like your flow...you lost the beat a couple times...and you seemed like you were rushing through stretched lines...although you did seem like you had a talent with punchlines because some hit pretty hard...all in all...your going to be good...you just need to relax and write bars that fit the instrumentals...good job though

v-vendetta...for a superior verse...good job man
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