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Old 06-28-04, 05:03 AM   #12
SparSin
Devil's Advocate
 
Posts: 139
check it

IP:

let me break it down

look at ya name you aint hip hop son you just a school Topic ..
and ya verse may sound good but doesnt work like Reaganomics ..1
7/10 good opener and word usage
ya need flows while i beat hos from models to chickens in street clothes ..
got jet ski boats and kilos while you baffled on C Notez ..2
5/10 alright punch good flow to it
Econs verse's need to make like Sea-Sections and Cut It OUT ..
ya easy, i'll beat you on a three day hangover and blunted out ..3
6/10 good punch
insult ya best work ya lackin kid consult the experts ..
make the tech squirt and have ya chest on the outside of ya sweatshirt ..4
6/10 good punch
give facelifts ya wasteless ya girl dont even like you , She Faked It ..
Econ couldnt keep LUKE warm if he gave Skywalker a Blanket ..5
8/10 lol i like that ending...


Kid take notice, what you’re facing here is rather rare//
For my awesome lyricals could label me a cavalier//
6/10 alright openin, no punch tho
My lethal lyrics’ll crush this bitch like he’s hit by asteroids//
When I bust this, results are more demanding than British tabloids//
5/10 good punch, word of advice tho chang ya words up some used lyric already should use rhyme or something else know what im sayin...
Take away the “meta” and you got a fucking third grade subject//
I’ma stab this bitch like sharp stings of "meta" in his optic//
7/10 like how you used meta in that shit and way to attack his name
See this bitch trying to dig deep into my “Guilty Conscience”//
Cat failed, I flow freely and make rebuttals out of nonsense//
6/10 alright punch
Shit…trying to bruise me scientifically, man hip-hop ain’t your thing either//
This is your kind of site:
http://encarta.msn.com
dawg you can’t “rip” even when you’re trying to "sell short" a beaver!//
3/10 wtf you puttin a web site in there for that dont rhyme good??? and a bad closer....

METAHphysiKz-32/50
Eco-27

not tryin to hate eco, but you not a newb thought youd have better shit but good battle
i voted ya shit fairly vote on my fairly
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