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Old 06-28-04, 05:18 AM   #23
QBsmasher
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I dont have 100 posts, but this was really a great battle and I just wanted to drop my oppinion on it.

Hoops: Ive seen some of your other battles, and I really like your style. Although I dont think you came as hard as ive seen from you before. Your structure and flow was a lil off (as I did flow your verse to a beat).

" funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother".."

This really threw your flow off, and Brother+color I think was a bad choice of rhymes/wordplay.

" this kid thinks hes an einstein, the IQ of a genius..
when really theres a thin line, between him and a penis.."

A good personal, Im not sure what other dude was sayin about this, but I liked it.

DaClassic: I liked flow, and it went together well. There wasnt much I could complain about.

" I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops"

That bar was tight, esp with the double meaning on "Shooting hoops"

" Females say you not even cute, Make up artists would take a full day
Can I borrow your face, because My Ass(butt) is going on holiday."

I really thought you got bored when you got to this point. Even though its a diss, its real weak, and just comes off to me as filler. I didnt like the wordplay in this either.

Overall though, nice verses from both of you two.

Vote = DaClassic