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Old 06-28-04, 05:59 AM   #11
Terumoto
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Both your flows were nice, but some of gods lines were stretched, plus state had a way cleaner structure n scheme... god, your lines were all over the place its confusing..

Wordplay was heavy in both ya verses, but state took it, punches hit harder and personals were solid...

v/ state capitol
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