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Yo dis was a good battle.......
1st Flow- L ya flow was good and i liked it, but it got a lil shakey at times..so try to make more sence and relate two sentences togeather like for example you said
"but it made no change, because your whole rap was rolling badly
all your words useless like a fingerless nigga at a bowling alley"
try to go off change like he didnt have enough money to get in the alley in tha first place na mean....but on the other hand that was you best line but you catch my drift....
Punches-ya punches werent nearly as good as Rascals, and dont brag ina battle like you were talkin about
"because i got mo skills,mo punches then rainy days in an english summer" again skills and punches have nothin to do wit the weather you could have said
"i got more THUNDER, then rainy days in a english summer" try to make your punches hit fuckin hard so hard that you think he might not be able to refrain from it...
Personals-i only saw one
"how can you call yourself a veteran champ u a veteran chump
got confused when your girl had a dick and and didn't have a cunt" and it still really wasnt all that good...and your not alone personals are the hardest to do for me cause im all about flow....try goin to the emergency center on the front page we can learn alot there...
multies-none what so ever from both mcee's
Rascal's flow-aaight flow L got you on dis one, stop wit all dat .........and shit.......
it gets annoying
punches-some of the best i have seen ina long time
"More L is a bitch always going on a walk out..
spits like thongs up assholes..
..the way his shit's always squeezed out"-thats some dope hard hittin shit keep it up
personals-your whole verse was like a personal specially
"Your verse like your Country just going down under..
thought someone was hyping you up...
...........When they said here comes the boy blunder..
Looked at your profile where i found "Money and Wealth"..
Rascal solves the problem..
..............................By Ko' this man of his ill health"-like i said some dope shit
Multies-none
well i got to go wit Rascal too many good punches and personals to not vote for him
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