Double Edge took this one... he had more wordplay and a couple of ok punches, somewhat played, but still came better than Sicc

Sicc just work on punching, fuck rhyming and multi's, anyone can do that. Rhyming ain't hard, it when you apply wittiness and punches AND rhyme that it hits... but good effort

Double keep elevatin, I liked how you came with a few concepts (they're a little played, but hey you're learning) and keep it up, in no time you'll be a force to be reckoned with... just remember if it was easy to think up, it's probably been done... better. So always come with something you haven't heard or read before, and then it will hit harder. pz

vote - Edge

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