Shadow- nice drop man....you didnt use great vocab but your story was tight
i could picture that shit in my head.....which is why you did good with imagery
i was feelin that story dogg..had me in to it all the way...that ending was tight
nice drop

Don- good drop dogg...never really seen you in a topical but you did ok
i wasnt feelin your story as much as shadows but i think you used better vocab
but shadow took imagery and i felt his story a lot more

vote-shadow