Thread: The Black Plague vs. integer1337
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Old 06-28-04, 01:22 PM   #17
Orijinal
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

Aight, here this is how I break it down.

Integer, you need to work on your rhyming sense and become more complex in lyrics because 3/4 of the shit you wrote was gobbage. "And I know how fast you can say that, just try/Cum shot right in your sister's eye." C'mon now, that was so simplistic.

Black Pague, you also need to work on your complexity, you need to elevate more.

Opener: Plague
Multies: Didn't see any
Punches: Plague
Personals: Plauge
Structure: Integer
Ender: Plague
VOTE: Plague

Here's my current battle, please return the favor.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100
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