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Old 06-28-04, 02:01 PM   #12
Orijinal
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
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Ummm...yung chris's structure of how he did his lines made me confused and made me off flow, you change how you write your lines. Yung Chris had better punches and better personals, but was it all true?

Ummm...fluidmoon you need to work your complex rhymes and use better vocabulary in your wordplay.

But, I think yung chris lost this one because he wasn't flowing as greatly and you needa good flow to win a battle. Opener and Ender belongs to fluidmoon. Punches belong to yung chris. Personals belongs to yungchris. Flow belongs to fluidmooon. No multies. Structure belongs to fluidmoon. Vocabuluary belongs to yung chris.

Vote: fluidmoon

Please vote in my current battle, I need votes.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100
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