Ummm...bcdynamic, you REALLY REALLY need to work on your flowing and rhyming. I couldn't understand what you were saying. You need to be more complex and you only jotted 4 lines down when the min. was 5. Your structure needs a little work also. And need to work on punches aswell.
Ummm...lilchi you need to work on your complexity, flowing, punches.
Well overall, lilchi won punches, personals, opener, ender, structure, and flowing. I mean, dynamic you need to work, but is all good, people gotta start from scratch and work they way up.
Vote: lilchiofthachi
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100