meta and flow nice drops from both of u.you both stayed on topic and to the point.flow ur verse didnt have much imagery it told a story and thats wat i like wen it tells the story cause imagery dont matter. u had a good flow and good strucuture so it was easy to rtead it and understand.meta ur verse had good strucutre not a great flow. it needed some work it jus wasnt as good.

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