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Originally Posted by EyeDentdy
that was stupid ass fuck.
ay yo, fuck a ball sack/
My thaoghts are of Ur skull meeting my ball bat/
bring beef nigga, Im like God, totally above all that/
Im a grown ass man battling Newbeez and unattended rugratz/
and if I docter patients, Ur rymes should be emetiatly treated/
I'll eat off Ur plate like Christopher Reeds in a room full of Fetus/
Cut off Ur head like net beef with Afgan Talibans/
U aint back to tha future, U go back to tha trash can/
I've seen more blood in this battle than care to see in a life time/
Dr. EyeDentdy cant keep Ur family from Unplugging U off that life line/
Send flowers to this battle after U niggaz vote/
cuz this nigga bit my ryme style and couldnt help but choke/
I call metaphores into actions like they was listed in phone books/
when U call, the operater says "nah nigga", than gets off the hook/
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Aight, flo was decent on both but when it came down to it Eyedenty your flo n structure is more wack than a four year old attending a grade 12 provincial...spellin is horrible n didnt even make it wanna read n with lines..:
and if I docter patients, Ur rymes should be emetiatly treated/
I'll eat off Ur plate like Christopher Reeds in a room full of Fetus/...Wtf?
Cut off Ur head like net beef with Afgan Talibans/
U aint back to tha future, U go back to tha trash can/...So Basic
Your lines are stretched n you jus throw on words that dont link, you need to more than elevate you need to "Get" game than "Step" up yo game nigga before you keep gettin merked...wait till next year pick up a thesarus n dictionary gain a vocabulary n learn to spell, n maybe you might contend..
Would props the other cat, but not enough here to give anything up to..
Vote: bk 2 tha future
PS: Eyedentdy to save you the time of startin the beef back cus by your style its obvious you don take critiscm or else you wouldnt have such a horrible style with a big post count along with your start date, you don like the critiscm, than elevate bitch ass nigga....