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Old 06-28-04, 09:28 PM   #10
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Geebs - Had about 3 good punches but you need to extend your lines a little bit. Not all of em but the real short ones. It makes the flow of the verse distorted. But not bad overall.

I shot Ya - You had better lyrics and punches than Geebs. I also give you my vot cuz you had a lot better flow.
Vote - I shot ya.

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