hoops ya opener started out pretty tight then the punch was weak as hell brah nice set up line but no punch to me your closer again the same thing nice wordplay in the set up but no real punch to me an the rest of your verse had a few nice lines to me like this 1 killed it
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..
^ LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
but the rest of your verse lacked punchs to me had good wordplay and a few nice lines but didnt feal most of it

classic ya opener was decent i think the punch wasnt worded right or somethin more like lost in thought bein familiar territory would have sounded better to me sayin hes there all the time but um ya closer lmao clownin nice set up an nice punch an the rest of your verse started off slow to me then kinda picked about after the first for lines then the rest was nice nice spit

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