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Old 06-28-04, 10:47 PM   #13
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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homeboy's rymes will get destroyed terribly..
get done hearing my rymes you be needing therapy..
AVERAGE LINE 6/10
you can take notes by reading my lines so read on..
my rymes be hittin you like a missle from viatnom..
HAHA NICE PUNCH 7/10
you get sonned like a herb ,im startin to think it your ritual..
my rymes are extrordinary ill merk you and make it official..
GOOD RHYME SCHEME AND VOCAB 7/10
gettin lit smashed and hit,thinkin your nice but your lines are shit..
have this kid cry'in and ballin rollin over throwin fits..
GOOD BUT BAD STRUCTURE 7/10
your rymes are poor and my lines are rich..
you cant land one punch so ill k-o you and treat ya like a bitch..
6/10 GOOD ENDER
33/50 OVERALL

Double you aitch...ay fuckin tee / what the fuck...you wanna battle me
ok folks... you seen the line up / no more jokes...he's been deny-in us
BAD STRUCUTRE BAD RHYME 3/10
confess to-nite...you ain't got shit / you just wanna bite... what i fukin spit
broke ass bitch.../ throwin lines for money
BAD FLOW BAD STRUCTURE 2/10
check out this.../ your rhymes ain't funny
give it up...your not what it takes / get over there...with the rest of the fakes
BAD 4/10
here's the stakes...i win you loose / first mistake...you should of refused
but what the fuck...holy crap / didn't get to hear...this guy rap
TERRIBLE PUNCH TERRIBLE LINE 1/10
you know tho...i just been thinkin / wait up ho...this guys sinking
in shit this deep / man fuck that's sick-ning
UR BEST LINE 5/10
OVERALL V/ VALOR ONE SIDED BATTLE
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