View Single Post
Old 06-29-04, 01:55 AM   #7
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
Posts: 2,765
From: inside your nightmare's
IP:

DECENT BATTLE...

illunatic-ur verse was okay,ur punches were good,u had a nice looking structure,and i thought i seen a personal in there also,ur verse flowed decent,and u had nice word play....so u had a very good decent verse for not text battlin in bout 3-4 months,not bad

envee-ur punches were okay but a lil to simple,u had no wordplay really it wasn.t good,u did flow pretty good though,but u also need to fix your structure,so i say elevate on your structure...and a lil more on ya punches...you will get better

v/illunatic
__________________
Crhyme Sindicate