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Old 06-29-04, 09:25 AM   #10
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:

Mad dog- i dont konw what people were saying...you had no punches
when you came out with punches in the first part of your verse

You dont win much that aint good u got zero improvment/
All i keep seeing on ur loss record is constant movement/
^^that was funny
you had some nice punches and personals good flow struc was off but
your flow made up for that...

Outsider- in my mind you had some played and basic punches

all dis shit about n site, ur just jelous of him cuz ur shit and white/
i fuck you up in spite, torch da mad dog wid rabies, and watch u die!/
^^that was a weak closer
you didnt have good wordplay..you did have some multis and an ok flow
work on your punches and personals more...work with that..it will help

you didnt have great punches..these newbs are lying..but maybe its cuz
they have never seen one

Vote-Mad Dog