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Old 06-29-04, 10:38 AM   #11
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Mad Dog - IIght verse. Had a couple of punches. Good thang you explained those two lines cuz at first i didn't understand em. Lyrically you did ya job. Only thing i didn't like was that you spit some bars in one line and others in two.

Outsider - Mad dog got you cuz some of ya lyrics wasn't really rhymin. Tha was a lil bit but you were pushin it. Decent vocab even though you spelled tha words wrong.
Vote - Mad dog.
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