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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP:
Both of you had pretty decent spits. Shadow had better imagery in his topical and more of a storyline that built up to a climax. Don your spit was also decent, your vocabulary was tight, just needed a little more to the story, work on your imagery. The story itself was good, just needed more to it, make us feel what this guy is going thru up until the point he shoots himself.
V-Shadow
Drop an honest vote on this battle when you get a chance.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130662
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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!
A.I.
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