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Old 06-29-04, 01:39 PM   #23
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Ink - aaah not bad.... you could have done better on this battle it was a close battle but i think both of ya need a lil work on how u set up ur punches...

Tekk - Nice shit but still not tha best that i've read u could have done better on this battle... Nice closer...

Overall Thoughts - Tekk and Ink could improve their punches by buildin they structure more like

Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah HIT-YA// << Set up for tha punch!
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah SHIP-YA// << Add a lot of multies a lot of wordplay 2...

And Ink woulda won this battle but he stretched his bars way 2 much and his structure sucked he had some good word play...

Tekk u need some work on word play and punches...

Weak battles guys real weak...

Vote: Tekk
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