B4 Lil-Trip even thinks it,This Is Not A Hate Vote.I'm Honest when it comes 2 Battles...

Lil-Trip

To me that was just a bunch of bullshit you wrote.You don't rhyme very well.How the hell you gone rhyme "it" three damn times?That don't work.Oh,I see the pattern you were trying to do,rhyming three lines.Your should stick to rhyming two lines.Stay even,don't go odd,It doesn't do to well in battling.Then ya verse wasn't making any sense for real.It seems like you just was throwing stuff together.
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Verbal Violence

Even though your verse wasn't as long as Lil Trip,it was overall better.In some places,your rhyming seemed to be off.Like I didn't see where line 4 fit into.It was a couple more lines were I don't see what you rhyming what too.So you should work on that.But overall,your verse was better than Lil-Trip,cuz he was writing a bunch of bullshit.

Vote=Verbal Violence.

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