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Old 06-29-04, 08:55 PM   #15
For$akeN
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Lil-Trip Drop:
If there was n award for whos freestyle was worst, verbal violence takes first
Bitches only get Burnt..Pussy U never had real Balls right from your own birth!
hmm it was pretty good not tight tho 6.5/10
Verbal couldnt compose a spit that hurt if he was spittin from under his skirt
Your goin Back..trips goin For-ward dig that Bitch only if you agree n Concur
pretty good some good vocab here... 7/10
Verbal reppin no rules so Ima take it back to 89 NWA n mix some Ol School
Luda! Verbal Acts a Fool n only spits when he hangs off my lips n Drools!
ya their we go getting better by each punch homey 7.5/10
Couldnt throw a Punch if I handed you my left Knuckle on yo broken head
"Trip your amazing" Thats the only "Verbal" comment your Head has ever said
nice again 6.5/10
V-Violence sounds like a broken appliance n dis Snitch needs to be Silenced
Don start spittin in a forum cus your the "Highest" bitch yo Lips are the driest
weak worst punch yet 6/10
When I asked to Bring "Beef" you tried to supply it than down right denied it
Im yo Mountain Peak you cant climb it this death certificate for ya i signed it
pretty good and i'm pretty sure your gonna merk him! 7/10
See gangs you flee it nigga im not a lawyer but i know business when i see it
Im takin pussy Trip only "G's" it Toss of a coin you see Heads n think Pe-nis
ya this was a hell of a good punch tight wordplay 8.5/10
You far from the top of the ladder ssss...stupid i don stutter whos madder
See Bad Boi n asked whos Badder? Puffy aint Biggie B's the 1 whos Phatter!
haha nice wordplay 7.5/10
So im done wit this lyrical encision wit my vision cuttin into your pink Blatter
U as recognized as the "Air" around U kinda around yet no one sees "Matter"
word nice again 7.5/10
Ill teach you my walk as time goes on Alias name trip real Name Chron Jon
Dont do "Footlongs" you got trip mixed up wit jus hate chill nigga your wrong
Homie Ur fucked n gone Stick to yo Fakin U been "Hooked-ah" on Trips Bong
wow pretty good closer 7/10

overall: 7.5/10 (good job! )

VV's Drop:



yo i never liked that movie it was boring//
thats what u remind me of the never ending story//
wake me up when it gets morning,as i start to get prepaird for this lyrical touring//
weak opener I will harsh 3/10
lil trip he fake prewrittin scripts all he needs is verbal with a twist//
ima poet like common he tryin to be like flip//
weak can I say more 5/10
he sad cuz with the loses he got his name minus well be r.i.p(rip)//
he bout to get another loss by the verbal king//
pretty good 6/10
cuz i come out clean hard with the k.o streek//
i cause lil trip to leave the violent scene//
ahahahahhahahahaha im laughing in pity .... 0/10
cuz im rated d for dangerous//
not for pg leavin my rhymesspaceless//
weak again 2/10
he to funny for me im the real rick james bitch//
ima leave him toung twisted with mad libs//
not a good punch BigChase I think says that a lot!!!! 0/10
commin swingin breakin u like an old ladys hip//
dislokate every vocal in you makin vibrations to ya finger tips//
and one thing u sound ganeric yo,ima be ur worst case in any scenerio//
your best line is your closer highly uncommon 6/10

overall: 3/10

lil trip won!
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