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Old 06-29-04, 10:05 PM   #11
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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da jokah it was good very good too good for a free and pretty long for a free too plus you went over your rules it was 31 when you said 30 thats a no no. But the actual lines were ok nice personals and punches also nice flow style was ok. your best line was: but my bullets consist of high coles-ter-ol,
so if u lookin to lower yours u should get a vest-n-all/ but can i asume that your really fat cause the whole thing was was about food.

Genicide it was good you definally fell from your previous shit but still good. um the style was changed which i didn't like but the lines itself was good better punches and personnal (probably cause it wasn't all about food) which means the hole thing was better even though it was really short. best line wasa jokah he always gets his ass kicked when it comes to batman…
You act all hard cause you are a “yung killa” but u prolly just a fatman

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