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Old 06-29-04, 10:26 PM   #26
Wicked One
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Close battle here......

Orijinal- Your verse was nice....but your punches were decent but some didnt hit hard enough...ur structure was decent but could be fixed up a little...and you had an okay flow...but overall you did well in dis battle..keep on elevatein.....

Mag...- Your verse was also nice...but your punches i thought hit much harder...ur structure was good...you had some nice wordplay and had some nice vocab....and you had a good flow wit your verse...so overall you get my vote for better punches and better vocab & wordplay...close battle tho.....

v/Mag...
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