verbal violence: i think your verse was really bad the structure was all over the place some lines were short some lines were long and your rhyme scheme sucked...you had only 1 or 2 hard punches the rest were just decent or really weak...your flow wasnt consistent and you had some filler in your verse...you had multies but they were weak multies and made your verse worst...your wordplay was also bad...and you need to extend your vocab...

overall : 3/10

lil trip: you had a decent verse...your was too much filler tho granted you was throwing punches but it was like........"filler............punch......filler..........fille r......punch" made less of an impact on your verse...one good thing about your verse was the structure even tho the lines were long the structure was good......btw shorten the length of your lines that also makes your verse lose impact...you had some good multies and about 6 good punches the rest were pretty weak...you had decent wordplay and consistent flow...overall the thing that stood out most in your verse was the multies....good job

overall : 6/10

vote: lil-trip

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