Shadow...good drop very clear, vocab was basic but the story was soo hot that the vocab didn't even matter, I liked your rhyme scheme an how you followed the story throughout, the imagery was tight an it made your topical come to life it was believable, it was like a written movie almost, good shit......8/10

Don...yours was good too, story wasn't quite as clear viocab was good though, rhyme scheme was solid but imagery wasn't as strong as it could have been, it flowed good though, but the story itself could have been stronger so even though I liked it, I don't think it was strong enough to win this one, son.....7/10

Vote: Shadow