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Originally Posted by METAHphysiKz
U Gon 'Die By Wordz'..There Ya "Fates-Given"..I Leave U "More Depressed" Than "Raped-Women"..
Bitch ..U Aint-Winnin..U Need To Stop..Work On Ya Dropz..Then Talk Shit When Ya Rates-Risen..
Like "Free Health Clinicz" All My "Linez-Are-Sick"..Put "Bulletz In Ya Skull" So Ya "Mind-Dont-Drip"..
Ya "Lifes On Ice" So Ya "Time-Done-Slipped"..Bend Ya Back To Ya Hip..Den Ya Spine-Get-Ripped..
Stupid Ho Yelling Gimme-Dome..No "Resurection" Juss "Convultions" So U Can Call Ya Self "Bizzy-Bone"..
I'll Kill DML With Many-Tonez..Like "Midgets In Pornoz"..U "Actin-Hard"..But U Spittin With "Mini-Groanz"
Like "Lesbian Alcoholicz"..U "Constantly" Using My "Name-In-Ur-Barz"..My Flames-Leave-U-Scared..
Ur Rymez Are Wakk..Go Blame-Who-You-Sharked..I Know Its "Online"..But Wordz "Aim-At-Ur-Heart" ..
Dangerous U Got Me Believin-Ur-Dreamin..U Bein 'Hott' Is 'All In Ya Head' Like "Steamin-Cerebrals"..
Ur Career-Is-On-Teeters..U Failed Dyke Films..So Now U On A 'Gay Sitcom' Called "Leave It Its Beaver"..
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now you had terrible structure actually it is quite horrid... you better quit thatr shit right now.....
your flow was terribly off becuz ur wack strucutre i wont lie... ur verse was half way wack...
you threw much harder punches the DML with i infact thought made you win the battle..
you didnt win by a blow away but ur punches edge you farther away from her.....
DML u know you my gurl..haha lol but im sorry he just came better my vote... phyzicks
both of you drop an honest vote on this topical aight?? ill leave the link later