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Old 06-30-04, 01:05 PM   #6
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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Originally Posted by ILLunatic
Aight go ahead and contest the best, but I wouldn't suggest
I've read your shit before, and i'll tell you I am not impressed
I'll tell you this you stand correct, from the words of ya sig.
Explained it good, ya did! You're just a "Motherfucking Kid"
Accepting to battle me is like asking for yourself to lose ya teeth
I'll slap you with a mic....
....wrap the cord around a throat, and watch you gasp to breath
3 Months since I last battled, you aint shit to come back too
You been gone too, i'll make you returning debut. "Envee's back"...."who?"
You're wack dude, I wont bother to check this battle, your that screwed
Infact dude, i'll give you props..........
......................I wont be that rude. Fuck it, let this battle conclude


Fuck it.. i haven't done text in 3-4 months... that was a keystyle



ur structure was better than his.. but only by a lil.... your rhymes scheme honestly sucked big balls......... ur verse was just all around bad...i was feelin it... ur punches wernt hitting hard.. quite honestly i didnt think u had one personal in this verse thats why envee wins overall 4/10
my vote envee
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