muthfuka hatin on wut it sayz for my occupation wen yours simple doctors patient
if lose my temper you be all over tha canvas like a paintin'
^Nice Opener..!!!! 6/10

please just leave your computer now and never look back, because your text is for squares like rolley back-packs
and "Gangsters Approved" of stoppin you in ya tracks, my flow will hang in your mind all tha time like ball sacks
^Decent Closer' ...!!!!! 8/10

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ay yo, fuck a ball sack/
My thaoghts are of Ur skull meeting my ball bat/
bring beef nigga, Im like God, totally above all that/
Im a grown ass man battling Newbeez and unattended rugratz/
^Weak Opener' .. FaSho // 2/10

I call metaphores into actions like they was listed in phone books/
when U call, the operater says "nah nigga", than gets off the hook/
^Ok Closer' ..... 6/10 .....

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