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Old 06-30-04, 05:31 PM   #17
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From: EastOaklandCalifornia
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mad dog took it......he had a better structure and rhyme scheme than outsider..though
he stretched sum lines to far.......outsider you could of won if you threw better punches.........your rhymes were coo but to basic try sum diff shit so u can elevate your status.........when you battle you to make da judges really feel u with "oohhs n awww" type of shit...weak battle