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Old 06-30-04, 05:38 PM   #16
The Black Plague
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Close battle, but Flash came out with the win because of better punches and more creative writing

MC Riot- Good verse, but you had a couple wack lines like the doberman pincher line and your closing line was wack. You had good punches and a few good personals. I loved your opener, and your cindarella line was good. You lacked in wordplay, and you had one extra line which kinda fucked up your structure.

Flash- Good verse also, you came good here. Your opener was kinda lame, but your bill clinton line and the personal about him being white hit hard, and gave you the win. You had better wordplay, and slightly better punches, so you get my vote.
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