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Old 06-30-04, 08:29 PM   #10
QBsmasher
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Pink: Good Structure, good flow, The punches were hittin to some extent. Try and use a lil more personal and word play next time though.

Miles: The flow was SYCK, structure was a lil off. Punches were hittin awesome, nice job of multiples I liked that. You praise yourself a lil much take that out and put punches in the place and it would hit even harder. Over it was pretty syck though.

V/ Miles

You two please hit his battle up:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132541