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Old 06-30-04, 09:35 PM   #29
Orijinal
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

I’m slicin’ through ya body nigga rippin ya cartilage
Ya verse is like a sewer hole it’s flowin wit garbage
Nice punch, good opener 7/10
You lyrically farted I’m killin ya and just getting started
Couldn’t spit a special verse if ya yas fuckin’ retarted
the lyrically farted wasnt good, but the next line was good "special verse" good. 7/10
Destruct the “Undestructible” my verse is physically untouchable
Dr ya ass like Huxtable from the Cosby’s turn u into a Lunchable
weak punch..weak weak 4/10
A comic exhibit ya style reached its limit this nigga is timid
Ban and prohibit ya wack ass life cuz aint no use to live-it
good..nuttin special though..aight 6/10
Battle me kid u gonna regret it and don’t u neglect it
You gonna take a “L” dogg remember I said it
weak weak closer..boring 3/10

averaged: 5.4

Damn nigga, your shyt iz a bore, u rap az slow as my grandma drives//
a chance of u beatin me is like a chance for da sun don't rise//
the first line was ass, real ass, then u came up so i have 2 give u half 5/10
You won 3 times straight, so its time for you ta start loosin//
Battlin me?Are you mental, jst go back to ur home da ill mental institution//
weak..heard dat shit a million times..wack 2.5/10
Hearin you rhyme? Is like eatin ur moms home made cinninman roll//
It sucks cuz it has no taste, so get a rap book n practice a lil mo//
wack..wack..wack..1 more time..WACK. nuttin 'WOW'. 3/10
Definition of $mokeScreen: White boy, 4 feet tall n has color-blindness//
If he waz eva to be rated, he'd be a 10, Oops i forgot da minus//
aight..no more punches?...im waitin for them..4/10
Your three n O, im bout to add a loss to ur record if u didn't know//
Cuz why should i even try wen dis kid raps weaker den a 3 year old//
weak closer..man..that was a simplistic punchline...weak 3/10

averaged: 3.5

vote: $moke
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both of yall can yall please honestly and professionaly on my current battle..judge it right cuz mad people gettin DQ'd for it...iight 1..please vote because i took a while to think about dis battle.1
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100
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