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Old 06-30-04, 10:58 PM   #9
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ill- ya shit was ok. I think ya punches hit harder then envees. ya structure was kinda crazy though. Not much vocab but still i think ya won. Not much personals either.

Envee- ya spit was ok too. But ya verse was too simple. Ya punches were ok. structure was aight too. ya had more personals. But work on ya vocab. If you had some vocab you could have won this battle.
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