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Old 07-01-04, 03:41 AM   #9
Know-Gimix
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changing your thoughts and blind punches, geminie must be your sign
i guese i had you in axiety so you bit one of shadow's lines - I think this was your best bar here.... all in all you weren't bad- But I think your flow and structure were a little inconsistent... punches were decent, nothing spectacular but the bar I noted was pretty good minus the mis-spellings.


DV tells u what to do, u sit and smile like mona lisa...
Im gonna be everywhere bitch, its like u own a visa... - This was my favorite bar from anxiety... There were a couple of good ones in here though, I also liked the chinese sound effects punch- I think your structure was a little disrupted also, and some of your lines were straight filler but I think your punches were stronger all in all and you came with some hard punches.... Vote anxiety...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305
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