rocks-
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Plus two is like a dumb dog coz his lyrics only got him "choked"
n reason I called myself rocks was 2 cum on n leave u "smoked"
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this was arite for a comeback opener... nice bar...good rhyme...no vocab 5/10
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Got this tied wit "rope".. u ever won 2 battles??........."umm nope"//
Newbs be gettin me "vexed" tryin ta "text" wit hence "complexity"//
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doesn't make a good bar...get both lines to rhyme... 3/10
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u gotta "accept" that this gun be ya 10th "wreck" for tryin ta rap "wit-me"//
ya bad rap are dtp just like "luda".. so im gunna dispose of ya like a "hoover"//
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doesn't make a good bar...get both lines to rhyme...some vocab 5/10
-my suggestion-
ya bad rap are dtp just like "luda"..u gotta "accept" that this gun be
so im gunna dispose of ya like a "hoover".ya 10th "wreck" for tryin ta rap "wit-me"
-somthin like that to make are bar ya know what i mean
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My raps gun get 2 u in ya sleep 3 days in a row.. plus-two like freddie fukin "crougar"//
like hoes u gettin "smacked".. gunna have u on ya "back" just for tryin ta "rap"//
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same thing...hard to read not a good bar bad rhyme 3/10
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ya leggless im suprised u aint "collapsed"..check the equasion..1+1=2. plus two="crap"/
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bad rhyme bad ending...2/10
overall 18/50
-try to work on some tight bars and you will rip...
plustwo-
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what where you smoking when you got the name rocks//
i heard you suck cocks, this guy's idol is goldie locks//
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ok... good opener... nice punch...flow...rhyme 7/10
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you wake up in the morning with a taske of semen//
when ever he's on the toilet he scream's "got release this demon"//
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ok punch... good rhyme...flow 5/10
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you don't wanna battle me son youve got no chance in hell//
ill take your mum and sister out, well have a threesome in a hotel//
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good punch and a little personal 7/10
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your getting murdered i know you wanna cry i can see it in your eyes//
i bet no 1 thought i could rip the shit, i can see your all suprised//
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ok rhyme... hardly punched 5/10
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im gonna have to go now i hope you don't choke//
you better shut the fuck up cos plustwo just spoke//
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good closer ok rhyme 6/10
overall 30/50
- a little more vocab and punch and that would be some hard shit
vote-plustwo