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I tell you now i know that if i help you and all other member post help u jus gonn post another thread wit the same old i need help routine so if i give you this bit of advice it might silence you so here it is...
From our last battle i admit u have elevated you can rhyme now at least. What you need to do is try and expand ur horizons by adding wordplay stop wit all the swearing n stuff in ur rhymes they occur too much. I find only desperate peeps swear.
Metaphors are good also in rhymes dont jus rhyme words into a rhyme coz they do try and build the rap up dont use constant fillers even try and make a battle diss into a story but make sure its str8 to the point coz if u slip from the subject it'll look stupid.
That enough?
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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