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Old 07-01-04, 10:16 AM   #13
Ca'lam
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From: Saint Louis
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aight... when i read the first verse, the lines were a little stretched, but it had some ok punches.. and a nice personal about this guys name..

Mad: lol i dont liek your structure .. but aside from that, i think you won this one..

sic:you beat around the bush.. sometimes i thought i saw a set-up, but then you didnt even capatalize on it.. just work on using more punches man.. honestly i dont think one hit hard.. good try tho, keep it up

v/Mad Dog


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