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Old 07-01-04, 11:53 AM   #2
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Mad Dog - Iight verse. But tha lyrics could have been better. Didn't see any good punches. And tha line about tha cat and pussy would of sounded better flipped.

SiccWitIt - Yo ya structure was fucked. You had 1 lined bars mixed in wit 2 lined bars. And some of ya lines was stretched while otha's were shortened needs alot of work. But i'm gunna give you my vote cuz lyrically you were ahead of mad dog. A couple of better punches. Vote - SiccWitIt

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