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Old 07-01-04, 12:11 PM   #8
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one sided battle....comershall your verse was just pitiful...the structure killed your verse it was too basic you had no wordplay or hard punches everything was just too simple and basic...start writing your verses in lines not paragraph's cuz that wont help you win a battle...killacamflow your verse was decent not that hott but at least you made sense and used words that rhymed even tho your verse was mediocre...not basic but not complex some decent wordplay and a couple decent punches

comershall : 4/10

killacamflow : 6/10

vote: killacamflow

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