listen to this..

that line u quoted with the "break the law" "jigsaw" whatever.. dont use that style at all.. the structure of those lines was ugly as hell, and flowin to it would be difficult.. make ur own style, but dont go too deep with all this fancy shit..

when u get to actually recordin audios, lines like that quoted from above are gonna go STRAIGHT over the audiences heads.. theyre not gonna stand there for 3 minutes and say "ohh, NOW i understand his rhyme scheme".. writin in text and actually recordin tracks are two totally different things.. if u spend all this time tryin to make ur verses look and sound complex, then by the time u get to actually recordin them, theyre gonna be impossible for the listener to understand and itll suck..

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