in a small town you get spotted tatted up wit dots now you the spokes person for target(lol)and when i hit you wit the eagle this man will be seein hoops
^Weak Opener, Bad Structure, Lacking Rhyme Scheme, Lack Of Wordplay & Vocab!! -/10

shoot through the loops in his eyes and let his brain loose im an excellent
marksmen i mark men assume it g you was an accident
^ lol I Cant Tell Where Your First Line Ends.. And Your Second Line Begins.. !! .. 1/10 .. Aiiight But Still Very Weak..

i serve purpose you got less of value than money on manopoly i pass go you half ho i meet in a alley
and dump you were the trash go i sit on cash sue me the only green you can get is sueshy
^Weak Closer' .. -/10

Work On Structure, Rhyme Scheme, Wordplay, Vocabulary....!!! Aiight Let Me Break It Down For You...!! .... Basically... All You Have To Do Is Work On Your STRUCTURE For Right Now.. lol!!

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this kid came here, yellow belly, and thought he could hang..
but his rhymes aint smashin shit, leave his skull brainsless and drained..
^Safe Opener.. Nothing Great..... 4/10

nigga in battle theads, you couldnt spit with saliva..
and you just my fuckin shadow, like im EM, and you Kuniva..
^Weak Punch... Not Feeling It.... 3/10

i spit venemous threats, beat bitches with vigerous texts..
whats funny is, if i forgot to spit, theyd still say my shit was the best..
^Straight Punchline There... !!! 6/10

i dont even nee dto finish my verse, so im leave you with this..
only thing golden about you, is the drops of urine on the toilet when you piss..
^Weak Closer.. But Merked That Other Catt E'z'ley' ...!!!

^Dropping Decent Bars... And Aight Punchlines' ... Pretty Much One Sided Battle..!!

Vote: Hoops

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